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Rosy

Rosy cheeks, pink lipstick She looked enchanting Beautiful like a fairy Enamored, he wanted to marry her He was wealthy, she gladly accepted Soon he realized without makeup She was ordinary Her most time spend in front of mirror, beauty parlour She was costly, egoistic and adamant He regretted his decision But endured her Within few years, she died of skin cancer One day, he saw a woman serving an old, ailing person on road He helped her and fell in love with her She was not beautiful outside, but had a lovely heart Always serving others Blissful vibrations surrounded her He proposed her She laid one condition I want to serve other's, He agreed wholeheartedly He sold his business, bungalow Shifted to a small house That's enough for both she said With his money and hard work Both set out spreading happiness More they gave More donations poured in The joy of watching someone happy The smile and gratefulness in their face Gave them boundless joy They lived happily till death using body and mind to serve others They lived a rosy life full of joy 07.09.2021 For: Constance La France, "R'' Contest, New or Old

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Date: 10/11/2021 4:12:00 AM
A lovely metaphor you have used to bring out a great lesson, Rama:) congratulations:)
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Date: 10/7/2021 4:15:00 PM
Hi Rama, I'm just coming back to congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/7/2021 1:22:00 PM
Dropping back with many congratulations on your win Rama:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2021 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations. Have fun with your celebration.
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Date: 10/7/2021 9:41:00 AM
Great incident and narration resembling a beautiful fairy tale. A real wish fulfilled. Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/7/2021 9:08:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write. I love your "Rosy" write. Too bad the world has not learned this. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 10/7/2021 7:50:00 AM
Rama, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this beautiful poem, so well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 10/6/2021 6:38:00 PM
Wow! Rama, You penned such a well-written inspirational story. True beauty comes from within. Outer will change but what's on the inside remains the same. Congrats in advance. Have a wonderful evening;-) Alexis
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Date: 10/6/2021 12:51:00 PM
Oh, My! Such an inspiring poem, Rama. Happiness is always within, it cannot be bought. Have a great day.
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Date: 10/6/2021 11:48:00 AM
Excellent story, well-told, Rama. So meaningful. I echo everything Jan said below.
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Date: 10/6/2021 11:43:00 AM
aww what a beautiful uplifting poem Rama, you tell such a vivid story with your lines and after all beauty is only skin deep its what's on the inside that truly counts:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/6/2021 11:48:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful comments Jan. Made my day! Enjoy your day.

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