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Rose's Prisoner

I lay within a rose of ash bleeding color into its cracks watering it with my tears no one knows that i am here i spread its love with my screams within a feild of paper dreams its thorns are the pain i hold hating none; hating all betrayal makes a petal drop falling hard like a rock it breaks apart in the wind calling out to the land within a rose of ash i stay keeping me prisoner every day the paper flowers grow in white the only light within the night this world is black and white and gray shades of my mind encased hellow, im here, i swear im not gone im dissapearing, with all the wrong breaking down im caught in chains within this paper rose of ash each day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/17/2009 11:49:00 AM
ver nice poem friend i love the decripsion of how the rose was waterd and colored
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:37:00 AM
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:27:00 AM
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:21:00 AM
Very descriptive. Keep writing. Sara
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