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Roses Before Breakfast

Interrupted slumber aided by shadows in her mind night sweats and horrors haunting away times heavily dragged in fast rewind of pirouettes amongst poppies red rouge cheeks and eyes mourning memories and cries Life tumbles slowly as day breaks apart tired bones creaking with the old oak floors coffee cups call her to wake but the blue bird distracts in a simple melody of peace and in a moment of calm she bends and smells the roses

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Date: 11/19/2016 11:49:00 AM
A gorgeous poem, Tim. You really know how to paint a picture w/words. The imagery is outstanding. Great poem. Love always.
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Date: 11/18/2016 9:27:00 AM
Beautiful , Tim, the second stanza is me with the creaking bones but cranky when I wake Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/17/2016 5:31:00 PM
aww... hugs
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Date: 11/17/2016 5:23:00 PM
How beautiful!!!! I love the imagery here. What a wonderful poem :) I love it, so well crafted! <3 Juli-Michelle.
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Date: 11/17/2016 3:56:00 PM
So beautiful and romantic Tim I love the transition from sadness to happiness:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2016 2:38:00 PM
Roses smell so beautiful...Such a wonderful poem Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/17/2016 3:19:00 PM
Thanks for thinking it's wonderful
Date: 11/17/2016 2:35:00 PM
So very warm and inviting is this poem. The love and caring that it expresses is beautiful. Her darkness is lifted temporarily by the beauty she finds. Really nice Tim.
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Date: 11/17/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Chris
Date: 11/17/2016 2:25:00 PM
- A beautiful and romantic morning, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/17/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thanks A-L
Date: 11/17/2016 2:19:00 PM
I knew by the title this was going to be a romantic sweet write! You are the King of them! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/17/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thanks I was going to write about you but the words ran away.

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