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Roses Are Red

Roses are red and so is my heart. Just like the flower it's a work of art. And every time you need to depart My heart begins to crack and fall apart Praying, for the moment you will return, my heart lying ill from the concern. There's, only one way to cure this yearn, it's your love, which makes this fire burn. My heart, weeps a flood of blood-red tears. when, the presence of your love is not near. And, it pumps joyfully when you appear. For your love, I hold so deeply dear. If, you were to leave my heart would explode. Forever losing, the gifts you bestowed. I, refuse to allow our love to corrode. Leaving my soul, forever widowed. 5/31/2017

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Date: 6/3/2017 4:00:00 PM
- A really touching and beautiful writing, Jeremy - A lovely flow in your rhyming - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/3/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine :)
Date: 6/3/2017 11:05:00 AM
Thanks monorhyme and concrete are my best forms I think :)
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Date: 6/3/2017 11:03:00 AM
Very nicely done and very heartfelt, Jeremy, the only monorhymes I have done are the ones that rhyme all the way down ~*
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Date: 6/1/2017 7:46:00 PM
Oh wow, this is beautiful indeed. A superb job done, Jeremy. I like it a lot :)
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/1/2017 11:26:00 PM
Thank you, very much Akkina :)
Date: 6/1/2017 3:24:00 AM
Beautiful Jeremy, what White Wolf says, I like it a lot.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/1/2017 5:03:00 AM
Thanks Darren :)
Date: 5/31/2017 10:04:00 PM
I really like this one, Jeremy! Well done mate
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 5/31/2017 10:06:00 PM
Thanks a lot :) I, have been a love thing lately!

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