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Roses

I have been born a rose with inch-thick thorns. I am: Extremely dangerous Highly potent A neon light explosion A supernova of stardust Get too close, I will make you bleed. Sweet, succulent drops into your mouth, over your teeth. An iron dance on your tongue, a fire burning in your eyes. Hands like shears you swoop down and uproot me Take away my oxygen, my light, my life. The sweet sugar that used to bubble up and drip down my stem like honey now clogs my pores and inflates my body. Your greedy harvesting hands could not wait for me to grow, to bloom, to blossom. I could’ve been warm, I could’ve been soft, I could’ve been everything by being nothing at all… By being me. I am not here anymore. A rose is a rose is a rose You would rather no one have me at all, Than to let me be my own.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/29/2016 12:08:00 PM
Beautiful prose from a beautiful rose!
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Date: 10/27/2016 10:41:00 PM
Very well composed!! I loved this work of yours. Keep on writing.
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Date: 10/27/2016 3:04:00 PM
I loved the poem but will never be able to figure out that mind set. If someone cares about you, they should want you to be happy. And yes, it hurts to lose someone but, let them go and be them.
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Date: 10/25/2016 5:26:00 PM
Sophie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/25/2016 2:33:00 PM
Very powerful Sophie!
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