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Roses

pondering the blooms that grace the paths not chosen- so sharp the thistles pristine trails that woo the soul, roses sweet, among the thorns

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Date: 10/3/2015 8:34:00 PM
Love your metaphor here, David. I think your poem says--that sometimes the lovelier path is not chosen because it is fraught with hardships but still lures us because it offers the better reward? Lovely Haiku! Sandra
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