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Shedding gloom
Even on bed of thorns
Enchanting roses bloom

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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:50:00 PM
    Mohammad, love the image and message. love the new look. always~ PD

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    Date: 12/2/2012 5:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks PD. As they say 'beauty is in the eyes of beholder'. I praise your eyes. Love
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 7:15:00 AM
    Loved the image! Terry

  1. Date: 4/15/2010 7:06:00 PM
    Nice Haiku, thanks for the comment and finding that slip-up, have a lovely day!

  1. Date: 12/29/2009 10:02:00 AM
    Wonderful Haiku Mohammad, poems with Roses in them are lovely. Thank you for your comments on my poem " A Lonely Man " i don't write poems to shock or to sadden, when i write them, they could be happy or sad, love story or war, no matter the ocassion or time of the year. I write, i post i move on to the next idea,theme etc >> Happy New Year >> James

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 3:49:00 PM
    What an uplifting view. Yes, one can choose how one looks at the world. Glad I ran into this haiku again. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 6:11:00 PM
    Best wishes with your eye recovery. Congratulations on your book honor. Nice use of rhyme and imagery in this poem. Thank you for your kind comments. Look forward to your return to The Soup. Karen

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 12:09:00 PM
    Actually 3 made it to the semi-finals, but whose counting? laughing out loud. This Haiku is a true maserpiece, ohammad. Thank you for sharing. I too wrote a Haiku 'The Rose' as follows: Love child born in spring - blushes in all her bautry - velvet skin exposed. Lainie

  1. Date: 3/6/2009 7:07:00 AM
    The contrast works in this poem. I like the glimpse of hope at the end. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 1/16/2009 1:00:00 PM
    nice Haiku enjoyed it lotz ...**Maryam

  1. Date: 1/1/2009 5:20:00 PM
    Neat rhyming and lovely word choices... BRAVO Mohammed! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 11/9/2008 12:29:00 PM
    The imagery is excellent. This goes to show us that even when things are bad, love exist. Also, even from between thorns love riseth; therefore, anything is possible. Great job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 11/8/2008 5:12:00 PM
    did you ever wonder how something with thorns can be so beautifully enchanting, eloquent write, take care D-nyce

  1. Date: 11/6/2008 12:23:00 PM
    Nice use of contrast to convey this timeless message. Life sometimes depends on attitude and view. Nice job! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Have a nice day! Karen

  1. Date: 11/6/2008 7:01:00 AM
    roses are my favorite this truly is a nice write, keep on writing on.

  1. Date: 11/6/2008 5:32:00 AM
    Oh yes, even with those thorns. Brilliant! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/5/2008 6:31:00 PM
    A very profound write here. In faqct, I'l bet she's smiling. :) One can only bloom after living within thorns - there is no other way. love Kristin