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After pruning some on my pale pink running rose and thinking about how in life that God has to prune us also..Sara
Ya'll remember Rose that on trellis grows How lovely, her pale pink blossoms in spring She now has a few dead stems that show Also some rapid growth, frame overfilling She needed to be pruned there was no choice It was painful process, for vinedresser Hurting to core, in this job didn't rejoice How it hurt Rose, dripping wounds no lesser Why did he prune Rose this day _severely Taking away the newly acquired green May not know fully answer or reason clearly Until ages past then old answers seen He prunes us, cutting away the dead parts Cuts new growth going in wrong way of the heart_

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/31/2012 6:22:00 AM
I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry this morning. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Sara. Love, Carol"
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Date: 5/4/2012 3:19:00 AM
so awed by the depth and feel of this piece, sara... you got real style!.. a rose protects itself through thorns:) huggs
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Date: 5/4/2012 1:09:00 AM
Smile ˜ I Was Just Visiting Our Beautiful Linda-Marie's Beautiful Poem Once More &, I Saw Your Beautiful Picture, My Dear Precious & Beautiful Sara * Sooo As Ofttimes This Sudden Desire; I Thought I Would Come & Say Hello Unto Your Gifted Loveliness ˜ I Love This Profound In Beauties Verse ˜ Within My Minds Eye I Find This Vibrant, Thriving & Fragrant Flower ˜ Tears From Ashes Unto Everlasting Joy; A Metaphor In Love ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜
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Date: 5/4/2012 1:11:00 AM
...."STAY BEAUTIFUL, 'DEAR BEAUTIFUL SARA.'" *
Date: 5/3/2012 8:47:00 PM
This is a charm, Sara. Hugs, Marci
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Date: 5/3/2012 12:38:00 PM
The roses needs love and care. - Lovely written poem Sara, thank you. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/2/2012 10:22:00 PM
Lovely verse on the rose,Sara
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Date: 5/2/2012 5:45:00 PM
that's only at the start, the blossom never lessens.... love it mate...
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Date: 5/2/2012 4:00:00 PM
hummm. so far He's cut away an ex wife some bad girl friends. real leaches. and a few bad habits.
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