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Rose Garden

Sitting in a rose garden with the one I love, A warm summers evening, Sipping nice cool wine, so devine Hands touching hands, the scent from the flowers, Heaven on earth, singing birds, tweet, tweet, tweet. The setting of the sun is like fire in the trees As their branches shimmer in the breeze. The trickle of the fountain, calming of our spirit, Sitting in a rose garden with my wife. This is my entry in the five senses, five elements competition

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Date: 4/3/2009 6:04:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 3/13/2009 11:23:00 PM
Wooooow! What a wonderful picture to paint. Very romantic couple. I like this Mr. Wilson. ernilando
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:46:00 PM
Such a lovely sweet write Leon. I can almost picture this garden in my mind...wonderful!
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Date: 3/13/2009 5:48:00 PM
I love the sweetness of this poem, it has beauty and love wrapped up in the nature of the senses . Lovely write! ~ Carrie
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