Rose Bowl

Bulbous in its’ form, Destined to hold cut flowers: Molded from the earth.

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Elaine George

Date: 12/31/2009 4:03:00 PM

It amazes me...when I stop to think about it...how many things in our lives come from the earth. Lovely Senryu, Raul. I find this form difficult and will attempt to write some . Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/31/2009 3:24:00 PM

~~Raul~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/31/2009 12:48:00 PM

I love the way this poem can be interpreted many ways! Well done....you have us pondering! Happy New Year, Raul...and many thanks for your kindness this year! Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/31/2009 11:30:00 AM

Ohio State vs. Oregon.. what's your pleasure Raul.. could be bulbous in its form.. destined to hold cut flowers after winning game.. molded from the earth of real or turf... give me the Pros though.. good luck to your team.. good writing here to express a double entendre... cool... HNY 2010 ..with blessings.... luv... thankxxx for commenting on my poetry today... Linda-Marie

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/31/2009 8:38:00 AM

Picture-perfect, Senryu, Raul! Happy New year to you and yours! Peace and love, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2009 6:22:00 AM

Interesting write. Sara

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/31/2009 6:06:00 AM

Let's play a little football!!! Hope this is the Rose Bowl you were writing about. Excellent write.