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Rose Blooms in Spring

She turns sixteen one cold December clime He strings dissembling lover’s thorns so girthed The sprouts of pristine virtue split by crime The core is sore, this shriveled Rose is birthed Though frigid Rose, she seeks to now resorb In her befuddled plight, she mopes the night Unless she grips the dim celestial orb, This missy won’t discern the course to light For limpid routes unveil the flourished trees The cue this Rose reckoned to spring to growth With flower buds resurging strong in breeze The core once sore is now in timely blowth She’s now eighteen one blissful, springy morn Before the world, this blossomed Rose is born

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Date: 5/11/2024 11:22:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/12/2024 2:40:00 AM
I appreciate your feedback and thank you for your message.
Date: 5/9/2024 1:50:00 PM
Here is my first poem. How did I do?
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