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I rolled over my finger On the head of a rose It was smooth and bulky Like a face way back to my road With each touch of the finger On the petals of the rose I loosed myself in the skin of a rose Which I never touched Like this beautiful rose It drifted back To save her self She said to me don’t touch me again I moved my hands back To feel her safe Then I said to myself why? Then my anxiety made me to do it again With several tickles on the petals I experienced the extreme smoothness again I rolled my finger all over the rose But my finger didn't stopped until A petal, broken down on the floor…… Hari Das

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/21/2014 3:02:00 PM
Exquisite write! This is such a deep powerful piece! Well done, Hari! Keep churning more gems like this one! Pandita
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Date: 7/7/2014 7:44:00 PM
Hari,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/5/2014 6:28:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Hari. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/3/2014 3:39:00 PM
WAOW I LOVED IT ..keep it up!
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Date: 7/2/2014 2:03:00 AM
Hi Hari, congratulations on a great write - I really enjoyed reading this poem! Well done!
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Date: 7/1/2014 11:12:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 7/1/2014 6:57:00 AM
very deep write... intriguing one.. hope that rose rose to be whole again. :) WARM WELCOME TO POETRYSOUP!!! I have been here bout two years now and I really am having fun and lots of learning here more than poetry itself but life.. :D i hope you will enjoy it here as I do.. :) God bless you >> :)olive eloisa
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Date: 7/1/2014 12:18:00 PM
omg u people have lots of poem in u r profile which one i should go for i am confused any way thanx for the view shore i will look into it ....what u said...
Date: 7/1/2014 4:23:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Hari :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/1/2014 12:21:00 PM
Thanx Anne ...yes i am happy here. its good to see all experienced people like u ...i will keep on posting ....
Date: 6/30/2014 10:16:00 PM
Deep & Beautiful,, Hari, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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