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.         any                  way
       youwant          toseethem
    theblotches        inthispicture

  thoughts       that       were
  alreadyin       your       mindall
youcandois      try         tomakesense
ofthemand       piece      thisbroken
    puzzle         back       together

                     task -the inkblot to the left of the title banner was my 'inspiration'. I 
was hoping to pull off something roughly in the same ball park.

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  1. Date: 12/22/2009 9:45:00 AM
    Great idea, Yoni. Ink blots scare me to death. At my age, I see the damndest things, all probably demented. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 9:59:00 AM
    Well done - and best of luck in the contest. Congrats on your first round win

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 8:37:00 AM
    Very clever Yoni, Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 9:53:00 AM
    Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Yoni >> James

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 10:00:00 PM
    Yoni, congrats on your success in Deborah's contest...Raul

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 1:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Yoni. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 10:38:00 AM
    Many congratulations Yoni on your win in Deborah's contest >> James

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 5:46:00 PM
    Wonderfully creative shape, Yoni! Congrats on your win in Deborah's contest! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 8/26/2009 11:07:00 PM
    Brilliant shape, Yoni! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 8/26/2009 6:17:00 PM
    wowser..GREAT..concrete verse...I say shamrock!!!! 4 leaf clover!!! tatatadaaaaaaaaaaaah! Light & Love brainiac

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 8:49:00 AM
    OM Gosh!!!! This is terrefic!!!!! Always impressed with your work... ALWAYS. Your friend w/ love, Lucinda

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 10:12:00 PM
    Hi Yoni, my mind seems to be blank. The only possible image I can even slightly come up with is, maybe the bottom of a type of a vehicle, like a buggy or something of that nature. And even that takes a lot of imagination. Sincerely Moses

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 8:59:00 PM
    Very nice piece of work....Karla

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 3:06:00 PM
    rorschach made most of the movie. i felt for him but in the end..... nicely done, imaginative. John H Loving III

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 2:37:00 PM
    I found so many images in this that I probably failed the test, Yoni. For some reason, I keep seeing a dragonfly and a pyramid. Really don't know what this means. Never took a rorschach test. The Christmas Cactus is the name of a specific flower. It is a cactus that has beautiful blooms that suddenly appear around Christmas. Very popular indoor plant. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 12:01:00 PM
    Brilliant Yoni. I found the whole hoo-hah hilarious but this is one hell of a response. The narrative (which is skillfully done) reminds me of Zukofsky, but the work as a whole is definately you and shows a great talent as well as a dedicated poet.

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 10:48:00 AM
    Love the artistic format of this poem. It must have been quite a challenge to put it all together for our reading pleasure. Thought provoking piece. Thank you for sharing it and for taking time to comment in my poem. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 8:03:00 AM
    Good morning Yoni. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 7:48:00 AM
    OK, You gave me 20 minutes of joyful entertainment!! I found a heart, a ball, and an eaten apple... Original and playful, Yoni. Good job. Ruben. PS: Oblique is the key word (a glass of wine?)... Every word "works." : )

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 1:14:00 AM
    Interesting concept. Keep writing. Sara