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Roots

She enters carefully A journey that began so long ago Culminating on this threshold of discovery With the turning of the knob, an old door, of peeling paint and squeaking hinge The house, a derelict with broken shutters Darkness, mold and gloom,...yet a pleasantness...a sense of familiarity Floors that creak and groan Surveying each room...gathering thoughts, sensations, emotions Digesting the essence of stories told Of sitting on a grandfather's knee, and hearing of this legacy So long harbored, like faded photographs, in her heart A glance outside the bay window Pushing aside the cobweb laced shade Rubbing dirt and grime from the glass, and viewing a river in the distance A pasture overgrown with weeds Gopher hills the only things sprouting in the yard Flower beds empty, except for tendrils of devil grass.. Forsaken, abandoned it is today,...but she can picture it then... She can see the geraniums in bloom as if it were yesterday She walks the hallowed rooms imagining the family The father coming in from the fields Covered with the red soil that he cherished The mother, apron clad, gathering her children Yes....it is over there where they would sit... Around the table, the Bible resting on the shelf Waiting to be read by evening light Just as the giant oak in the yard That shouts and tussels with the wind With deep roots which cling so intimate with the rock below In this journey, she clings... To things that are deeply rooted Family, love, life, death, that which is...that which has been.. No longer are there only sepia colored stories Stored in a shoe box on a closet shelf... This is a journey that continues on and on... And like the oak...it reaches deeply...searching for constancy These are her roots... ___________________________________________________________________

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Date: 3/31/2010 10:02:00 AM
What a winner!! You are such an awesome writer, Carrie ... its scary ... LOL ...
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Date: 3/30/2010 9:35:00 PM
A lot of fond memories in that house, thanks for sharing
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Date: 3/30/2010 1:33:00 AM
The good old days still haunting us when we come in contact to places holding special memories. Enjoyed the reading this morning, and good luck to you for this contest, Carrie. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/29/2010 4:01:00 PM
I read this poem almost with reverence. This scenes were so familiar, the memory so poignant ... and telling, O the telling was excellent, my friend. One love and all the best in the contest.
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:26:00 AM
This is an incredible piece, Carrie! The journey in your life seems to be filled with strong roots. You have an admirable perpective and I wish you luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:07:00 PM
Carrie~ What a beautiful story you told yes roots to carry on don't they. I love this piece best wishes in the contest! And thank you for your on going support here on the soup. Love Laura :)
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Date: 3/25/2010 10:52:00 AM
Absolutely breathtaking memories. Wishing you the best in the contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:35:00 AM
Perfect, Carrie! This should be the start of a short story!!! Sometimes it is sad to see what happened to our still vivid past! It is so good that we still got memories even if only in sepia...Thank you for sharing this wis us and thank you for your comments...Really enjoyed redaing this!...Love, Gert
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Date: 3/25/2010 4:03:00 AM
The journey back in memories...Great idea and topic that should be in the winner's circle ..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/25/2010 1:51:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian.My latest contest ANY WHICH WAY is now open.
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Date: 3/25/2010 1:03:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.Enjoy your grandchild company,they take years from you until they leave.
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Date: 3/24/2010 8:59:00 PM
As always, a very great descriptive write, and I'm sure will do well in the contest. LUv, Andrea ps there is one other people other than Bree who loves housecleaning . MY MOM, that's why I hate it so much.
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Date: 3/24/2010 6:55:00 PM
A touching journey of the mind's eye, bound to the heart. RAY
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Date: 3/24/2010 6:42:00 PM
My-oh-my, Carrie...These are your roots!... Great nostolgic piece of work indeed...I have many of the same memories of my grand-parents' house where I used to spend summers as a young lad...I can still remember every square inch of that place! - Tim
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Date: 3/24/2010 4:59:00 PM
good luck Carrie, but with this piece i don't think you'll need it. Wonderful!!
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Date: 3/24/2010 4:41:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Carrie and good luck in Matt's contest.. a winner for sure..luv.. Linda-Marie
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