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Roots

Roots A beautiful rare flower sprung up out of the center of the desert only to be greeted by the hostel environment of the scorching sun. After days and weeks had past! the brutality of the mighty desert had almost claimed the very part of the flower that had brought it life. Frail and dehydrated the flower found what little strength it could to call upon its roots. Give me the strength to push on! help me to defeat the inner blackness that surrounds me! and give life to my soul once again. Help me to breath beauty into my surroundings and may the light of the scorching sun bring purity and protection. Against all odds! the flower survived the inner darkness of the mighty desert. Through the faith of its roots and the light that surrounds it. The flower is forever Radiant!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/28/2016 12:34:00 PM
Eric, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 5/28/2016 12:34:00 PM
eric fowler, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 6/3/2010 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Eric. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:03:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:48:00 AM
Wonderful and beautiful piece of art displayed in the soupland. Congratulations. Wish you more success. Ernilando
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Date: 4/12/2010 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Eric. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2010 4:30:00 PM
Very neat poem. I love the way you have so gracefully painted a story without even mentioning anything beyond a picture to play in our minds. Very well written Eric, will be following your work.
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Date: 2/5/2010 8:38:00 AM
What beauty unfolds in this exceptional write ... i love the interconnected theme. Welcome to poetry soup, the home of poets and friends, and I shall be honored to have you as more friend.
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Date: 2/4/2010 10:13:00 AM
great work here and surprising that you dont have more i really got the meaning to this poem an intellegent and beautifully written piece. =)
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Date: 2/3/2010 3:06:00 PM
What an outstanding piece you have written here Eric. Thank you for posting and sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2010 10:37:00 AM
Great imagery
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