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Rooting For 8 To Five

Woman of Fertile Earth, come sing to me let these hands, feet explore your hidden wonder to submerge into dewy grounds rippling life's music, of infant buds lisping tenderly among field's roots as nature grants lush springtime its tuneful arrival. Rooting For 8 To 5 !: nette onclaud's Contest 4th January 2017

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Date: 1/10/2017 3:49:00 PM
wow, like a song of glory to nature. congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 1/9/2017 10:43:00 PM
Beautiful! Congrats!
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Date: 1/9/2017 4:47:00 PM
Amelie, this has a beautiful, almost meditative, flow. Each line sounding its own tune to join with the others..Great job...
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Date: 1/9/2017 4:09:00 PM
This almost reads as if nette wrote it herself. You have matched her style very well. Congratulations, Amelie:)
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Date: 10/22/2017 11:41:00 PM
Yeah it's amazingly similar style right? No wonder she won!
Date: 1/9/2017 1:31:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful, Amelie. Your poem really speaks to me. A 7. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/9/2017 12:51:00 PM
this really spoke to me-- very haunting, amelie.. hope you could write more often.. sweet congrats and thanks for joining.. hugggs
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