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Room

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Room

What sweet Vanilla smell,
as gilded memories pass through.

Dwelling on works as they transcend
and cut into-
Aromatic Vanilla.

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  1. Date: 7/7/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Short but extremely well thought out -nice!

    Martinez-Rivera Avatar Luis Martinez-Rivera
    Date: 7/7/2012 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I find length a construct of the imagination if the mind can say what it wants to say in five lines then it should only take five lines.