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Romantic Senryu

neighborhood children laughing play hide-and-go-seek— he steals his first kiss a teenaged couple smooching beneath the bleachers— flashlights and sirens a husband and wife smiling on Valentine’s Day— a pink negligee © January 27, 2012 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Romantic Senryu Contest Sponsored by: Francine Roberts

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Date: 1/27/2012 8:04:00 PM
Nice progression, Dane Ann. Enjoyed reading this tonight. Love, Kim
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/28/2012 3:10:00 AM
Thank you, Kim

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