Romantic Mush

Folks who know me are aware that I seldom write romantic mush.
Such saccharine verse is alien to me and causes me to blush!
But just this once I'll paraphrase some verse upon which you may muse.
Perhaps it'll arouse your curiosity, but as to its source I'll provide no clues!

"Ah!  How beautiful you are, my darling, there is no flaw in you!
My heart begins to pound for you - my head is drenched with dew!
Your breasts are like two fawns - like the twin fawns of a gazelle!
How beautiful you are with your delights that I know so very well!"

"You are as fair as the moon and stars, your smile brightens the dawn!
Your temples are like pomegranate halves my precious sprightly fawn!
Your graceful legs are like jewels, the work of a craftsman's hands!
Thy lilting voice is as melodic as a legion of celestial bands!"

"Your lips are like a lovely ribbon and so lovely is your mouth!
Thy arms that embrace me are like a gentle zephyr from the south!
You have stolen my heart with but one glance from thy limpid eyes!
You are as graceful as the majestic eagle as it soars through pristine skies!"

"You lips drop sweetness as the honeycomb, my precious bride!
How I long to have you forever more walking at my side!"
'Tis beyond this mortal to write such mush or any like it thereof!
Check out Solomon's Song of Songs for more such lurid tales of love!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
© All Rights Reserved
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/3/2012 6:50:00 PM
All I can say is you can write "mush" any time. The Song of Solomon is enhanced with this lovely verse so now write one of your wife!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2012 5:10:00 PM
You couldn't fool me. I knew where it came from. When my husband to be was courting me, he often used the words of Solomon in his letters to me. My husband is a preacher and writes all his own sermons. He says he can't write poetry, but his letters were rich with Solomon's words. Bob how is your wife doing? I hope you are getting the proper rest you need so that you don't burn out. I like your poem very much. By the way, I'm just a little over 200 with my poems.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2012 11:01:00 AM
WOW! '...'tis beyond this mortal to write such mush or any like it thereof,' ??? and what exceptional mush it is! Brilliant rhyming, imagery and language. BRAVO, my friend!! Best wishes, Keith
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2012 5:39:00 AM
hahaha, I once wrote a sonnet very similar to this, and I gave it a title implying it was trite (making fun of that style of mushy writing)! It's fun to see you doing something like that with this one!!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/2/2012 8:18:00 PM
pretty fine write for one who does not like romantic mush Bob.. always a delight to read your expressive poetry luv.. glad all are OK now in your State...we got hit on East Coast with those crazy lkghtening storms.. lots of damage but we are OK ..
Login to Reply
Date: 7/2/2012 10:24:00 AM
this is the kind of mush i will want to have any time, bob... 'cmon, you an incurable romantic!!...fine job, wheww!..) huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 7/2/2012 9:12:00 AM
Awww, I'm sure Vera is blushing and grinning from ear to ear, Bob. Beautiful romantic mush indeed. I think Sue would laugh if I tried being romantic, lol.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/2/2012 2:18:00 AM
Beautiful, lovely and romantic poem, bob! - You are the best! - Love it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter