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Romantic Footles

Hot date At eight Champagne … Explain Red rose Propose Gold ring Wow bling Says YES!!!!! New dress Set date Can’t wait! Honeymoon (3 syllables forgive me please) In June Jan Allison 25th August 2014

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Roy Jerden

Date: 8/26/2014 5:56:00 AM

Nice footles, Jan! I think you've found your form!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2014 7:04:00 AM

Thanks Roy I do have fun with them:-) Hugs Jan xx

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/25/2014 10:34:00 PM

Wow, fast. Haha. Enjoyed!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2014 3:05:00 AM

LOL Toquyen when you find the right one - why wait! Hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2014 5:14:00 PM

these are really clever. YOU GO< FOOTLE GIRL>

Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2014 5:43:00 PM

Tim and Casarah have written me some Andrea - do go and have a look lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx I just can't stop writing them they are addictive!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/25/2014 5:10:00 PM

Great footles..Way to go..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2014 5:43:00 PM

They are just for fun Sara i can't stop writing them now:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/25/2014 4:29:00 PM

i still am not completely sure what footles are. i hope i'm not shoving one in my mouth by saying that. although i have heard that for some it is a desirable size. i love it all the same. i will keep trying to research the topic.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2014 7:39:00 PM

each footle has 2 lines and the end words rhyme - any subject make the title of the poem appropriate to the subejct you choose- no punctuation as far as i am aware - i use it for effect - have have written about 8 lots just go to my page and look at the footles - you will soon get the idea or go to the 'contest winners .member' and see all the winning footles from judy konos contest:-) Tim Jmith and Casarah wrote some about me tonight LOL! Hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/25/2014 4:48:00 PM

any other rules. like how many lines. subject matter. do they have to make sense. are the readers suppose to like them. do you have to use capital letters or proper punctuation. i am not sure if you have noticed but i am not really that proficient at either. if a parsley farmer owes money do they garnish his wages?

Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2014 4:32:00 PM

very simple form Maurice - two lines two syllables in each line - Judy Konos ran a contest recently and Andrea Dietrich has one now - have a go.. I am a bit addicted to writing them LOL. Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/25/2014 3:46:00 PM

I do...you too......moon light....delight..,..new pooch.....big smooch.,... Hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2014 3:59:00 PM

Yes I didn't see you around hope you are feeling refreshed now -its been torrential rain all day here so was glad I was cooking:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 8/25/2014 3:52:00 PM

I saw earlier but couldn't keep my eyes open.....very hot and humid today. My body was drained....a few hours of sleep does wonders.... Hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2014 3:49:00 PM

aww I should definitely write them with you Tim you are so romantic:-) Just wanted to do light hearted after my other poem today :-( Hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/25/2014 3:32:00 PM

Awwww....nothing like romance, Hon! :) Lovely!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2014 3:37:00 PM

Thanks Eileen written sad poem so thought I better go with happy too:-) Hugs Jan xxx

James Fraser

Date: 8/25/2014 3:00:00 PM

Nice one Jan, I would have gone for 'Now Wed - In Bed' ;) but I still loved it - James :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2014 3:04:00 PM

LOL I knew there was one I forgot to add ! Hugs Jan xxx