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That evening, so romantic along with you by the seashore as I sat watching the dreamy sunset... when the sky blushed in pink, relishing his kiss - the sun's parting kiss for the day: so sweet, but quick.. her cheeks were glowing: the sky - a blend of red and orange and almost flushing red now as her beloved orb golden takes leave for his short silent stroll into the lonely dusk to leave her be lost in a reverie for the rest of the night with a promise to be back to illuminate her somber soul with his effulgent gaze the next dawn I remember those enchanting eyes... that spoke a lot... when a soft sea breeze gently whispered tales of love into our ears... on that glorious evening... I still remember... those eloquent eyes of yours... yearning to be merged with those of mine your voice was muted you were silent as always but... those fetching pair of eyes... they expressed more than your voice would ever have In a distant land now... engrossed in duties to trudge through the daily grind do you still remember that beauteous evening as we sat beside each other losing ourselves in the mesmeric charm of the sunset feeling the throb of silence when my eyes happened to read between the lines of an incomplete romantic tale of the memoirs of your soul's diary... as they met... your entrancing eloquent gaze... Date: 10/06/2021 "R" Contest, New Or Old Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 10/12/2021 1:09:00 PM
A slow dance with a beautiful memory. Very thought-provoking lines.
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Date: 10/10/2021 1:57:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Anitha, who could resist such a warm, and wonderful poetry.
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Date: 10/9/2021 6:18:00 AM
This is absolutely amazing. So beautiful from top to bottom. Great description of sunset.
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Date: 10/8/2021 12:24:00 PM
Anitha, congratulations on your win with this great verse.
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Date: 10/8/2021 10:26:00 AM
This is such a well deserved win. I am seeing from below here that you got a top win, so BIG congrats. You were very clever in how you presented this poem with the two different fonts. Very romontic, dear. Congrats.
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Date: 10/7/2021 11:17:00 PM
Beautiful, Ani... So lovely imagery throughout... Enjoyed reading it...
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Date: 10/7/2021 3:30:00 PM
Wow! Anitha, You composed a lovely poem using the word " romantic". I found it to be enchanting and very romantic. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
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Date: 10/7/2021 1:15:00 PM
So beautiful and romantic Ani. many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2021 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win - I knew you would! A lovely romantic poem with mesmerizing images. Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:35:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Mala... for the return visit and the congrats... Have a lovely day... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 10/7/2021 9:30:00 AM
This is a free verse with every minute detail ending with meaningful glances. Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris... God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 10/7/2021 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula... You too have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 10/7/2021 7:45:00 AM
Ani, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this beautiful poem, so well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:31:00 AM
Constance, thank you so much for such an inspiring contest...enjoyed writing as always...Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 10/6/2021 10:56:00 AM
Ohhhh...so romantic, Anitha. This poem takes me to a dreamy sunset on a beach. "your entrancing eloquent gaze..." Love your word-choice! BW ~ Mala
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:26:00 AM
Mala... Thank you so much dear... am happy you loved my word choice... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 10/6/2021 7:43:00 AM
What a romantic poem. 'm sure it will rate high. Best for a win.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/7/2021 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 10/6/2021 6:43:00 AM
You rose well to the challenge Ani with this very romantic verse. Best of luck in the contest and hope your week is going well. Tom
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/6/2021 7:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Tom... just a fiction for the contest... yes, going good.. I hope your week is going well too... Have a blessed day... ~ Ani

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