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Romance Under the Canopy

. Under canopy The canopy of thick trees Just my love and me Gently he holds my warm hand Then tenderly a light kiss

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Robin Davis

Date: 1/22/2014 8:57:00 PM

Sara Such a passionate and loving write. The love is flowing in each line. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Princess poem.

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 2:17:00 AM

this is a wonderful peace here my friend like all you works i have read this morning duncan

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/7/2010 8:25:00 AM

beautiful tanka, congrats on your win in the contest

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/7/2010 4:57:00 AM

Awe this is such a sweet write Sara, congratulations on your win ;) Wilma

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/7/2010 3:55:00 AM

Such lovely words. many congratulations.

John Freeman

Date: 10/6/2010 5:13:00 PM

Congratulation Sis on your poem's victory in the top ten spot. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/6/2010 3:28:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your win in Chris's contest with this excellent Tanka entry .. a lovely piece.. enjoy your sweet victory today my friend with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2010 2:55:00 PM

Love the romantic quality of this one. (old world romance!) Luv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 10/6/2010 12:57:00 PM

Many congratulations Sara on your win in Chris's contest with this fine Tanka >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/6/2010 10:56:00 AM

Sweet tanka. congratulations Sara. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/6/2010 10:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sara in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "T(h)anka You". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/6/2010 5:59:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win , Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/6/2010 4:10:00 AM

congrats on your win with this sweet tanka, Sara! --nikko :)

James Fraser

Date: 9/24/2010 2:52:00 PM

Delightful and dreamy Sara, now where's this canopy. Have a lovely weekend >> James :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/24/2010 6:01:00 AM

Passion and love pours out in this beautiful Tanka....love Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2010 4:50:00 PM

wow! the title got my attention , and the poem is full of your passion Sara, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/23/2010 10:46:00 AM

It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Sara. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/22/2010 9:45:00 PM

such profoundness in one of life's simple joys, this is so special, and will touch many that read it. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2010 8:02:00 PM

That is a very tender line, about a "slight kiss" It's very romantic. LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/22/2010 4:49:00 PM

so nice and romantic.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/22/2010 2:59:00 PM

Both of the tankas you posted today are remarkable, Sara. Which will you be entering in Chris's contest? This one stays true to the standard tanka form, but carries a message similar to the other. The "canopy" makes a lovely sanctuary. Very nicely done on both tankas. Love, Carolyn