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Romance Senryu Contest

From hospital bed To dinner date and a rose Your eyes held my heart On valentine day Our rose bush blooms crimson buds Blushing memory The stars shine tonight I look up and you wink back Your bright eyes hold me © Brenda V Northeast 26th Jan. 2012 For Francine Roberts - Romantic Senryu Contest

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M.I.A .
Date: 1/26/2012 7:26:00 PM
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awww, you are on a roll of some serious romance emotions here. a winner for me. good luck on the contest
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/26/2012 5:12:00 PM
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I love the last two and how they related to things in nature. Very lovely, Brenda.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/26/2012 9:32:00 AM
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Very passionate indeed..I am reading between the lines in asking is this valentine in his heavenly home now?...Good luck in the contest ...Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the show of concern but we don't live in tornado alley but we do live where tornados come quite frequently.There has been several on the ground very close to my home since I have lived here.We have only had destruction of trees and no property damage.God has looked after us in that we have been safe during the storms.Sara
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/26/2012 6:13:00 PM
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Yes Sara- He passed away 21 days later we had our last Valentine dinner together. It brought tears to my eyes and heart to write it : )
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 1/26/2012 9:05:00 AM
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such emotional words Brenda.. very touching .. good luck .. a contest winner luv..
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Robert Pettit
Date: 1/26/2012 12:18:00 AM
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Great triple romance senryu entry Brenda.
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/26/2012 1:12:00 AM
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Thank you Robert- I just noticed I have a typing error, blessings, bren : )
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/25/2012 10:08:00 PM
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A beautiful story! How wonderful to be blessed with such love!! Blessings, Rhonda
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/25/2012 10:21:00 PM
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Thank you Rhonda many blessings to you, Bren : )

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