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Romance (For Amy)

ROMANCE It was something by Schumann or Schubert A Sonata for piano perhaps I wouldn’t have cared But the music fit the girl Flawless in dress Hair not short not long middling It swept just mildly over forehead and cheek Cupable shoulders And the rest? Not a line not a curve too severe She came at the same time each day I strained to see her face. But my view was taken just far enough away The vision much in profile I must revel in her stride Not short not long deliberate Just right In a flight of fancy With missing dimensions of the physical time and space I decided she was form-in-isolation A shape behind a scrim Always coming Always going Leaving her ghost in wake And the door would softly shut A little space for dreaming Then this same piece It was something by Schumann or Schubert (no matter) Each day played with more polish ‘til at last it sounded perfect to me I must know that which she played Its name (lack of) haunted me This was my excuse My excuse for knocking on the door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/15/2010 4:19:00 PM
Great soft romantic dreaming that you have done with this one.Keep the romantic pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work about the Blackberries..I do enjoy blackberry cobbler and jam..Sara
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Date: 6/12/2010 11:59:00 PM
So soft and romantic, tones of the music she loves so much underlying it. I bet Amy is simply swooning to get this. Is this the poem you told me of a while back? Hey where have you been lately?? And what is this poem PD is talking about dedcating to you?? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/12/2010 8:59:00 AM
Enjoyed, Daver, loved and enjoyed your latest comment. Always looking forward to see real expressions on my poetry...I dedicated my latest poem to You hope you do not cut my HEAD___________...You can not miss the tittle,..SIDNEY LeeAnn
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Date: 6/11/2010 3:33:00 PM
Amy will love the romantic man who hears this beautiful sonata each time he sees her, Daver. And I love the way it provoked you to make contact with her in the last verse. There was also something special to me in the "shape behind a scrim." Gives it an ethereal quality. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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