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Roller Coaster

Here i am back on this emotional roller coaster... im getting sick from all these damn turns, swinging my feelings this and that way making me feel ways i would rather not say! praying that this ride is safer than the last, the last ride was going way too fast and the bolts came a lose and i crashed. i was hurt for awhile but of course i had to get back up and try it again... this ride that im on now is different its exciting but i feel safe, my seat belt is fastened and im holding the grips extra tight, cause ill be damned if i fall again, sick and all im going to stay on until this ride stops and when it does stop i will just get another ticket and ride this ride all over again...

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Date: 1/2/2011 6:21:00 PM
ah I can picture that horrible ride, lol but we always get back on for more, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 12/15/2010 11:20:00 AM
great analogy!
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