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Rodento

Rodento is a pal o' mine he sits atop a tree, an extra to its foliage, a natural topiary. I named him 'cos he looks so real, a critter with a snout, a wiry tail part of his trunk, some whiskers, and a pout. He greets me every morning when I take my cup of tea, as I stroll along the balcony I swear he's watching me. When gentle breezes shake the tree the varmint darts and dances, but what if stronger winds persist pray then, what are his chances? What if a hurricane blows through? he might well disappear, disfigured by the elements, then I would shed a tear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/23/2016 5:24:00 PM
Hahaha I love this
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Date: 1/23/2016 7:04:00 AM
It's good to drift from your usual style. This one shows your lighter side, and your sensitivity to care for your adopted wild pet, or has he adopted you? ;)
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/23/2016 7:21:00 AM
Perhaps a strong wind would merely give him a little needed rhinoplasty?
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/23/2016 7:16:00 AM
I think I adopted him! Sometimes 'natural' topiary can be so realistic, like the shape of clouds! Thanks Lin... best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/22/2016 11:52:00 PM
I love how you can take everyday topics and weave such creative poetry from it! Cheers!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/23/2016 12:03:00 AM
Like I said in my author's note... 'I need to get a life!' This 'natural' topiary was really quite remarkable, and worthy of a poem though it's far from my usual style! Thanks Arthur. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/22/2016 11:44:00 PM
A very pleasant read Keith. Tricks of the eye. Nicely done. Regards, Craig
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/23/2016 12:04:00 AM
Yep! It was really quite remarkable... thanks Craig. Best wishes, Keith

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