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You are a rodent to a snake if you walk in its territory. Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 05-10-2012

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Date: 8/12/2012 11:49:00 PM
Oh MAN!!!!!!!!!!!! WOWOWOW!!! Smh...what a poem...what a poet. Plain and simple. I enjoyed the MESSAGE not the reference to those creatures lol! Xoxoxoxo
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Date: 7/24/2012 7:45:00 PM
I'M WAITING TO EXHALE........ PD
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Date: 6/27/2012 4:49:00 PM
ekkk ekk,,,,I'm running...I hate them snakes... back to my TT.... always..PD
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Date: 6/18/2012 12:29:00 PM
Oh gosh, your haiku is sublime.
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Date: 6/9/2012 9:32:00 AM
Your haiku's have SO much depth in their briefness! Looking forward to reading more <3
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Date: 6/11/2012 11:03:00 AM
Thank you for sharing with me!!
Date: 6/2/2012 2:04:00 PM
This one is right..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..Sara
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Date: 6/2/2012 2:08:00 PM
No, thank you Sara!! Hugs
Date: 6/2/2012 11:59:00 AM
No doubt. My husband has a snake phobia, so any snake handling is left to me. Take care. Janet
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Date: 6/2/2012 12:18:00 PM
Lol..I won't be handling any snakes anytime soon..you have them all.
Date: 6/2/2012 11:17:00 AM
Nicely done poet
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Date: 6/2/2012 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Sean!! Glad to have you come by..as I indeed love your work.
Date: 6/1/2012 11:22:00 PM
Love the hummor! Carma
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Date: 6/2/2012 12:23:00 AM
Thank-you Carma!! Hugs
Date: 5/31/2012 5:10:00 PM
the more i read the more my mind expands.. love this site and the different genres and writes...this write feels very instinctual and enticing..tyvm karen...ex owner of a snake.. i kid you not lol and he kept trying to eat my leg :)
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Date: 5/31/2012 5:24:00 PM
Oh no maam!! I will not own a snake now just for that reason!! lol
Date: 5/31/2012 10:45:00 AM
Another great Haiku... something to strive for... Terry
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Date: 5/31/2012 1:25:00 PM
Thank you dearly Terry!!! hugs
Date: 5/22/2012 6:11:00 AM
Sounds a bit like turf rules. Neat a Haiku that reads two ways and both quite true. Good job. Huggs TLee
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Date: 5/22/2012 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so kindly!!
Date: 5/21/2012 5:43:00 AM
I wish I could write such succinct haiku. It works on many levels. Thank you for commenting on my poem. Nola Perez
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Date: 5/21/2012 6:00:00 AM
All smiles..thank you!!
Date: 5/20/2012 2:47:00 AM
no rodent chirping at the moon, a flash a blur comes tucker soon, ol brown snakes sweet delight... great poem mate...Don
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Date: 5/20/2012 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Don!!
Date: 5/18/2012 8:19:00 PM
Pace your turning my head to Haiku... excellent>>>Patrick
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Date: 5/18/2012 9:24:00 PM
Thank you yet again..please visit more often!!
Date: 5/15/2012 9:35:00 PM
coming back to this one again. I sure like it alot.
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Date: 5/15/2012 10:48:00 PM
Lol...thank you!!!
Date: 5/15/2012 11:36:00 AM
Much said here.. Very clever post.. Charma
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Date: 5/15/2012 12:02:00 PM
Hugs!!
Date: 5/15/2012 11:35:00 AM
Much said here.. Very clever post.. Charma
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Date: 5/15/2012 12:02:00 PM
smiles..thank you!!
Date: 5/15/2012 11:32:00 AM
lovely
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Date: 5/15/2012 12:01:00 PM
Thank you madam!!
Date: 5/13/2012 8:57:00 PM
Wow, straight foward Haiku. Love it :)
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Date: 5/13/2012 9:59:00 PM
Thank you madam!!
Date: 5/13/2012 7:44:00 AM
you pulled me in, pace.. smashing study of the element-of-surprise approach!... wink!...:) hugggs!
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Date: 5/13/2012 4:59:00 PM
Thanks
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Date: 5/13/2012 4:57:00 PM
Thanks!!
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Date: 5/13/2012 8:24:00 AM
Thank you!! Hugs
Date: 5/13/2012 5:46:00 AM
It says so much xxx
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Date: 5/13/2012 8:23:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment!!
Date: 5/12/2012 6:59:00 AM
WOW my poet brother... I think I shall walk around and watch... Michael
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Date: 5/12/2012 7:13:00 AM
Lol..That was funny!!
Date: 5/11/2012 1:40:00 PM
NICE! :D Always, Laura
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Date: 5/11/2012 2:31:00 PM
Thank you sweetheart!
Date: 5/11/2012 11:18:00 AM
A real cool Haiku G.....Joseph
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Date: 5/11/2012 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!!
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