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Rocky Mountain Water

Here in the Rocky Mountains of Colorado, is the most pristine spring water anyone will know. Oh how wonderfully bright and clear. Nobody has springs like the ones found here. The drops twist and turn through the mountain streams. They move like the ones in the most elaborate dreams. Just as liquid crystal they will flow. The streams help all life to live and grow. Well, I am a lifelong East Coast man. Am I able to travel to Colorado? I never can. I have a small sample of Rocky Mountain water right here. I will pour it out of this can of beer. Written 9/21/2011 Robert Pettit

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Date: 9/24/2011 12:41:00 AM
A thoughtful little poem with a really fun ending. I enjoyed. WEll, goodnight. finally I'm getting off!!
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Date: 9/22/2011 12:52:00 AM
love the way you treated the theme, robert.. winning delight to you... wow.:) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/21/2011 7:51:00 PM
CO water is good but an ice cold Coors is even better :) Nice one Robert!
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