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Rocky Mountain Visit

Rocky Mountains tower in God’s sun Their splendor captured in photos Below wild stallions make a run Putting on such fun-filled air shows Silhouettes of birds passing by I call to them, but remain unheard Now I too feel free enough to fly But looking down, by fear I’m deterred *For Shaz Cheesman's "50 Word" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/24/2014 8:27:00 AM
Fifty words when I read I heard. The Rocky Mountains have a certain lure and beauty. Nice short piece Carolyn, James :)
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Date: 9/20/2012 9:04:00 AM
Thanks a lot!!
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Date: 9/20/2012 9:03:00 AM
Yeaahhh!A comment from you!!I am so happy!!
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Date: 6/6/2012 3:07:00 PM
You got a "Rocky Mountain High." This photo manages to fly. Love, it. daver
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Date: 6/5/2012 12:30:00 PM
Look up Carolyn...look up... never down...:) :) - Very well written, lovely. - Luck to you in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/5/2012 12:09:00 PM
Wow, you were not restricted by just 50 words! You went out and flew up and above and wrote a fabulous write with your incredible talent you bestow! I simply love your grandiose poem that you have written my friend! You will do well in the contest! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/5/2012 11:58:00 AM
wonderfully written with pure skill and craft. I like your words the unique sequence they use to bring out the meaning of your poem.
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