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Rocky and Raquel

The floodlight went out Just about two o'clock in the morning But little did anyone know That the attack was about to spring. Being asleep in their beds No one had realized what to think When the sound of a clang Meant that there was an invasion Right in the back yard. The pitter-patter of little feet across the brick Led up to the built-in garbage can. They worked very quick, Like two bandits in disguise, To grab a bundle of goodies. "But, I'll hold the lid up So that you can see. It's so messy down there, For a girl like me." "Okay, OKay, don't worry, I'll get the vittles." Hanging over the edge, He manages to scrounge through a pile But figured out he was stuck in a wedge Against the inside wall. He changes ges his strategic tactic just by chance, Side by side with his accomplice, They looked at each other at once glance. They struck a gold mine of seafood delight, And scurried away so excited With their catch of the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/21/2010 2:31:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv..
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:51:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Valerie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2010 11:49:00 PM
haha little bandits love how baby raccoons hide them selves with their hands like little children n.n fun poem
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