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Rock Song

Young, people of the troupe members had to say Poetry is a sin in Narcissus Rock song is more problem than that Another person of the theater company member Poetry is an escape from self The sun and the rock are the problems There is a thing that can make a shadow there It is an eternal problem

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Date: 11/28/2016 4:56:00 AM
You have a comma after the first word and nothing else. Personally I would prefer more so that I could then read it as you intend me to. As it is I read it as one long garbled sentence and for me this spoils what could otherwise be a very good poem.
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Date: 11/28/2016 6:20:00 AM
Thank you. I am studying writing poetry in English.

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