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Robins In Springtime

When velvet robins dive at night, to herald new spring’s lit premiere a chorus drools upon the lake; enchanting waves to bounce along and near a harbor, jasmines twirl from lively notes of birds' refrain... music pealing for spring's debut! Jesse Rowe's One Stanza Contest

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Date: 7/23/2016 8:53:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Nette! Congrats on your placement! Blessings!
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Date: 7/20/2016 4:17:00 PM
Hi Nette! I'm back to reread this beautiful winning stanza! Congratulations. Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/20/2016 1:14:00 PM
Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/20/2016 11:12:00 AM
Enchanting really...the lines composed. Congrats on your placing. Sunita :)
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Date: 7/20/2016 6:47:00 AM
Beautiful, congratulations Nette...
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Date: 7/19/2016 10:13:00 PM
Nicely composed verse. Congratulations for your impressive 4th place win in the One Staza One-Only contest! Jesse
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Date: 7/19/2016 3:49:00 PM
Nette, oh so perfect with lovely imagery lady..well written lovely Nette... congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/17/2016 5:10:00 PM
So beautiful. I'm using cell phone. This is so dreadful. Wish I were home!
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Date: 7/16/2016 3:28:00 PM
- A beautiful melody in your magnificent poem, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/16/2016 6:59:00 AM
Lovely write with a great rhythm!
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Date: 7/15/2016 8:01:00 PM
Beguiled! You caught a lush moment of a season's arrival with exquisite melody. When robins chirp, it's truly spring!
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Date: 7/15/2016 8:02:00 PM
And a 7!
Date: 7/15/2016 1:59:00 PM
This form poetry is remarkably captivating with a musical flow from your gifted hand!
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Date: 7/15/2016 1:45:00 PM
This is a beautiful quatern, Nette; your velvet robins and their song come to life in these words of yours. ~ I entered a poem for this contest, and now I'm wondering whether I understood right the rule about 1 stanza. Perhaps it's best we both check the rules again! Hugs // paul
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