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Roaring Pillow

The silence of emptiness is deafening, it roars from my pillow. Though eyes wide open I fail to see, for in darkness there are no names, only the flickering of my mistakes. So with ease I caress this mortal wound, borne of futures knife, for I am undeserved. Only the feeling of loss lingers this moonless soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/22/2010 4:54:00 PM
Deep and moving this prose poetry ... luv...the flickering of my mistakes.. powerful line in the compliment of the poem.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/21/2010 12:55:00 PM
Sad write with much feeling. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2010 12:51:00 PM
I really love your words, they always make me think, I have to read them so many times and each time something new comes to me line by line. Thanks Daniel your an inspiration
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Date: 2/21/2010 11:39:00 AM
enjoyed reading today, hope you are well.
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Date: 2/21/2010 11:38:00 AM
Ow that moonless soul..that Roaring pillow,Heartbreaking.Wish the moonless soul,loads of stars,,,beautiful poem..Charma
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Date: 2/21/2010 11:30:00 AM
Oh I have days like this....so real! Jeralynn
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Date: 2/21/2010 11:17:00 AM
Can feel the loneliness
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