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Roar

Roaring lion conquered her woe Sweetly batted her eyes, his doe His nips on her lips, fragile Slipping in ardor, agile And he stroked her flower-- soft Held her in his heart aloft Roaring lion conquered her woe Sweetly batted her eyes, his doe -------------------- This is called an Octelle, rhyme scheme= aabbccaa, syllables= 8-8-7-7-7-7-8-8

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Date: 10/5/2014 1:06:00 PM
Truly a great write.. A hard task to pull off with such few verses but you did it so very well. Rating this one a very solid 7...
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Date: 9/4/2014 2:06:00 AM
This is a great write. Love lions and how you made HER the lion and HIM the prey! Beautiful work!
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