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Roaming In Her Mind

I will roam in her mind to find the secret of her smile, how that brings a bright Sunrise in a gloomy Sunset dusk! I will glide in her mind like a bird in the sky, looking below to find the nest which she keeps just for me! I will walk through her mind like a traveller lost on its own, among the lush evergreen trees to catch her mind's butterfly dreams! I will swim in her mind take a dip in ocean blue, touch that pearl of her heart which I wished for so many days! © 2011 kashinath karmakar (26th April 2011) ================================ Placement:HM ;(May 2011) Contest: I,roam. Sponsor:Drake Eszes

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Date: 12/30/2012 10:00:00 PM
You have so many back pages now, kash with beautiful poems like this one. I believe I have seen them all. Isn't it amazing to think how far you have come since your first days here. Keep your bright poetic spirit for the new year!
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:30:00 PM
smokin', kashi.. sweet congrats! :) huggs
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Date: 5/26/2011 12:47:00 PM
Congrats Kashi on your win in Drake's contest..a good one and quite unique on this theme,and thank you so much for your kind remarks on my poems...gautami
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Date: 5/26/2011 4:37:00 AM
So sensual Kashi. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:19:00 PM
Hooray for you Kashinath!! This is a stunning entry! Wonderful is this! :)
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:42:00 AM
Way to go, Kash! Congratulations on your success in Drake's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2011 9:42:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Kash : )
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Date: 5/25/2011 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of drake, kashinath
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Date: 5/25/2011 5:28:00 AM
Congrats Kashinath on your HM in the I roam contest with this brilliant adventure in poetry my friend.. enjoy special honor with luv..
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:20:00 PM
Kash, how nice that you thought I 'd write of myself as an owl. That bird represents wisdom and love of reading. Not to mention I AM a night owl!! HOpe you like me as a dolphin too!
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Date: 5/2/2011 12:42:00 PM
Kashinath wonderful poem , my favourite stanza is the first one. Well done. Anne
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Date: 5/2/2011 1:16:00 AM
What a different take on the challenge, Kashinath-- yes we can certainly try to roam in other people's thoughts-- very interesting! Wish you the best in the contest :)
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Date: 4/27/2011 10:04:00 AM
quite a unique route you took with the roaming theme Kash. if only we could do the roaming you have in mind hey? Good luck for the contest with this gem ;)
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Date: 4/27/2011 7:57:00 AM
Wouldn't it be great if we really could roam through the minds of others, Kash? I have often wished I could do just this and you conveyed your thoughts so well in verse. Best wishes in Drake's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/27/2011 4:22:00 AM
Kash u are a wonderful writer and true romantic my friend.this piece on the use of roaming is utterly fantastic.. a gem.. good luck in the contest ..luv...appreciate your many sweet comments on my poetry .. encouraging..luv..thankxxx..
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Date: 4/27/2011 1:52:00 AM
beautiful flow you got here, kashi.. winning's best!! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/27/2011 12:19:00 AM
this is beautiful, Kash. Glad I decided to check this one out before going off. It's already after 1, which was my limit i set for myself tonight! I'll see you tomorrow! Keep doing marvelous poems like this one!
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Date: 4/26/2011 2:31:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Kash
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:37:00 AM
Oh....how I love the unique way you turned this into a different kind of "roam"! Lovely poem!!!
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:11:00 AM
I roam, glide, walk and swim in HER mind!
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