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Road Trip With The Kids

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Road Trip With The Kids

They fret
There yet?

She bit
He hit

Jaw tight
Food  fight

Oh Gee
Must Pee

More thrill
Big Spill

We're late!

They nod
Thank God!

 I think
BIG drink

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  1. Date: 2/10/2013 7:38:00 AM
    Barbara congrats on your win. Well done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 9:50:00 PM
    haha! congrats on your win! nice 1

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 9:01:00 PM
    Barbara, Congratulations on a job well done, in Yasmin's footle fun contest:-) take care~PD

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Sounds like you have made a few of these long trips! Congrats on your 1st place win, Barbara! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:16:00 PM
    congrats on your win Yasmin xxx

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 2:54:00 PM
    And have a BIG one for me too, Barbara!...This is the funniest one I have read so far...writing footles requires a good sense of humor and you obviously have that! - Tim

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 12:28:00 PM
    This is just too cute and soooo true !! Always dreaded long road trips when children were small. You've captured it well !! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 11:37:00 AM
    Congrad's on your fun win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 10:56:00 AM
    this is outstanding the way you made it into a true poem. Congratulations. love it.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 8:03:00 AM
    so true Barbara love em congrats luv xx

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:46:00 AM
    congrats on your win Barbara

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 3:38:00 PM
    lol, love it : )

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 12:45:00 PM
    A fun way to write, love it Barbara! - Luck in contest ! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 7:46:00 AM
    I enjoyd every line

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 10:34:00 PM
    Well done Barbara. Really tells the story. Good luck. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 4:49:00 PM
    Great job. Everyone can relate!