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Road To Realization (Part Ii)

Con't from Part II... Drained; an opinion he lacks Lax for years but now he’s on track Track wisdom; has a mental axe Acts as a way to crash walls, fight back Knack for writing, it became peace Piece of heart in each written-release Release stress; negative cease Sees in a new light, consciousness increased Impeach his old ways and his mind state State his ideals through wordplay Sure, cliché, but this is my chance Chants that make a difference from my stance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/26/2009 12:40:00 PM
I really liked this, both Part 1 and Part 2, especially the rhyming and wordplay, it's very clever :)
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Date: 7/23/2009 1:31:00 PM
well written it enjoyed reading all, thank you for your comments. priz
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