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Road Crash of Words

Upon the doorstep of my paradise, You’ll find h e l l i s h pansies and t a i n t e d tulips, obscured within a heart-shaped topiary…. As the sky is a deep purple b r u i s e, where daisy chains run the length of open c o r p s e s, Yet the altruistic sun too cannot disperse this f o g…. For what you thought may be the lane to the harvest moon, is a feasting of bitter petals and fruits. Not every aesthetic flower smells as sweet, and not every star that flickers is your golden lamp.. So walk through my haven of truth with an open mind. ….. Ever since oxygen became my gravity, I've been forever fighting- road crash of emotions… I'm still crashing as hopes keep crushing. Sometimes somethings aren't what we perceive from our eyes, whilst nothing may be deciphered as it should be, running your thoughts through this web of woven words can drive you up to an unfamiliar cliff, so save yourself from the sweat of having to read between these lines. I speak in eternal metaphors, as I follow the roots of where my pain has emerged. Emotions have exploded from corners where my soul was most at peace, when heart breakers and dream crashers thrashed my once virtuous visions, that left me hanging loose with alienated alliterations, until the premonition of a silent savior, who emerged from the scars of wounded warriors, his enchanted melody eliminated my feelings long dead, igniting an internal bonfire within an asylum of triggers. Although simple minds cannot comprehend the motionless existence of splitting paranoia deriving from an archive of old poems, my ink refuses to freely flow in lucidity, such is the world of virtual insanity, where unwanted labels are tossed like feathers of the fallen. In the coexistence of downcastness, It's no coincidence that I resemble a cumulus of clouds, before they form into a seething storm, nor is it a surprise that I am a profusion of rays before sunrise. I am the alchemistic shadows before darkness I am all the little details you chose to abandon.. so let me revive in undermined silence. where speech is judged as a sinful oath, only a luscious psycho would resonate with. Trust is a double edged dagger, translucently lost in translation, where precious memories, trigger the beginning of an unremitting end, with guilt dosed in deprived skeletons, I have buried deep inside me. I no longer live in the past where there is no refund for regret. Passengers who travelled without a guarantee, were unable to take control of my steering wheel, quitting this 'road trip', leaving me like a rejected vessel. I wandered on a lonesome path, until a serenity of waves led to words, resembling petals and pearls.

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Date: 1/12/2024 1:11:00 PM
Another win for you today...you must be smiling..Congratulations
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Date: 1/12/2024 10:24:00 AM
- A large spectrum of emotions lives in us... hopelessness and powerlessness are the states we feel from time to time... you convey thoughts, feelings and uncertainty excellently in this deep poem - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Ink - hugs
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Date: 1/12/2024 6:29:00 AM
Many congratulations on your epic write! The metaphors of movement, going forward + sometimes back are memorable indeed. Best wishes. Brian
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Date: 1/12/2024 6:17:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest podium win. It's a great honor to share the podium with you, dear Ink.
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Date: 1/12/2024 4:17:00 AM
what an imagistic journey this poem is! right through to that wonderful closure of "petals and pearls"..i like the way you spaced the lettering in those words near the beginning, it shows a creative mind at work..with a bit of condensing it would probably score even higher with me - congrats on your win in my contest!
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/12/2024 5:26:00 AM
Awwn thank you you’ve made me smile! Appreciate you sooo muchhh
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 1/12/2024 5:21:00 AM
no it was never in any doubt that it would be one of the top winners :)
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Date: 1/12/2024 5:03:00 AM
Ah dear charlotte im surprised i even got placed. I was expecting an NA. But i am so glad and so grateful to see my poem getting placed in your contest. I get too carried away rambling i should shorten a little bit my poems good idea thanks for the constructive feedback. Sending you light always
Date: 1/8/2024 4:53:00 AM
dearest Ink--your title (Word Crash) was fitting. Your words deeply 'crashed' my soul and left me speechless and a tad sad until the last few lines. So many wonderful lines filled with alliteration and imagery. I especially liked: 'In the coexistence of downcastness, It's no coincidence that I resemble a cumulus of clouds. I appreciate you sharing your vulnerability and delightful creativity. Enjoy your day, hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:18:00 PM
Woah, this was quite a vulnerable journey and I felt like riding with you here, as in, my heart could deeply resonate with these emotions full of anguish, when seclusion is the only truth that comes in our fate and things are not as radiant rainbows, as they might seem.. So many lines here really took me away on a breathtaking adventure "You’ll find hellish pansies and tainted tulips, obscured within a heart-shaped topiary", "where daisy chains run the length of open corpses" Sigh, so evocative
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:22:00 PM
"where unwanted labels are tossed like feathers of the fallen" I can relate with that too, when all one wants to give is love, kindness and empathy, yet they receive sinful labels in return of their compassion.. "with guilt dosed in deprived skeletons,I have buried deep inside me", "Trust is a double edged dagger,translucently lost in translation" True, it is.. This poem left me speechless.. What a significantly poignant and full of emotive scents.. Magnificently crafted, my dear Ink! Keep writing and shining, always!! ~
Date: 1/7/2024 4:10:00 PM
I Fav this, Ink. This really brought tears. The beginning I read and read. Chains of daisies...heart shaped topiary... wow. Left me breathless...
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Date: 1/7/2024 2:00:00 PM
I admire the imagery in this lovely, deep and meaningful poem. Wonderful writing, Ink. Blessings.
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Date: 1/7/2024 1:46:00 PM
This was a winding road of a poem with many facets. I like it, so I'll keep it to read again. Hugs to you.
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:59:00 AM
Stunning write, Ink. Jeweled words paint turmoil of emotions---In the coexistence of downcastness, It's no coincidence that I resemble a cumulus of clouds, before they form into a seething storm--I no longer live in the past where there is no refund for regret--Excellent as always! A FAVE again!
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:11:00 AM
Hey Ink, Your poem is a intense exploration of a personal journey, vividly painted with dark and surreal imagery. The juxtaposition of contrasting elements, such as "paradise" with "hellish pansies and tainted tulips," immediately sets a tone of complexity and duality. Your poem touches on the complexities of self-perception and the impact of external judgments. ..
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:12:00 AM
The reference to the speaker's ink refusing to flow in lucidity suggests a struggle with expressing oneself coherently in the chaotic world described... It leaves the reader with a sense of introspection, contemplating the complexities of human experience, trust, and the ongoing journey of self-discovery... Nicely done dear..
Date: 1/7/2024 8:08:00 AM
Your poem is a testament to the challenges of individuality within a society that thrives on categorization, dearest Ink. It symbolizes your resilience in the face of adversity, emerging from the depths with heightened strength, courage, and vibrancy. Never allow others to prevail, dear Ink. Your profound verses are enchanting, effortlessly captivating my attention until the final line. It is pivotal to steer clear of the path of remorse and hypotheticals. I have to favor this one.
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:02:00 AM
Sometimes somethings aren't what we perceive from our eyes,.. oooo.. running your thoughts through this web of woven words can drive you up to an unfamiliar cliff,… mmm the kundhalini saktiii!!! Mmmm XD!.. igniting an internal bonfire within an asylum of triggers... awwwwn .. the little details you chose to abandon.. oooo in love with the depth of that line! Passengers who travelled without a guarantee,.. oooo yesssss I love that!!!so elegantly woven to perfection!! They move gorgeously papi!!
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/7/2024 8:07:00 AM
Kundalini on fire yes lolol thank you so much papi!
Date: 1/7/2024 7:33:00 AM
I agree with the thought that looking back, traveling the road of regret or what ifs is not a good road to travel. Thank you for sharing these thoughts with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/7/2024 8:07:00 AM
Ah thank you dear sara so true. Appreciate your support always
Date: 1/7/2024 4:16:00 AM
I wandered on a lonesome path until a serenity of waves led to words, resembling petals and pearls. How I love your ending lines. To me, it signifies that in spite of wrongdoings, you have risen from the ashes. Stronger, Braver and more vibrant. Don't ever let them win dear Inky. Bravo and a fave for me..Hugs
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/7/2024 8:08:00 AM
Its always an honor to hear from you sweet maria. Appreciate you so much
Date: 1/7/2024 3:45:00 AM
So true … not everything is as it seems just like you have mentioned in your poem . Love it
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:08:00 AM
Awwn dahlin you read the opening very well thank you haha

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