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Built by Harland and Wolff in the shipyard's of Belfast A luxurious giant ship that they built to last An Olympic class liner of the White Star Line No expense was spared; she was grand and so fine. Southampton and Cherbourg then Queenstown in Cork Picking up her last passengers' before sailing to New York Large crowds gathered to cheer and to wave flags While passengers' embarked with suitcases' and bags. She upped ships anchor and headed out west Pushing her engines; putting them to the test Oblivious to the dangers that lay up ahead In the coming hours many on board would be dead. The officer on the bridge a large object he spied A mountainous iceberg on the starboard side They slowed down the engines; slammed them into reverse But there was a collision and then conditions got worse. Just below the water line it tore a hole down the side It couldn't have been avoided but they had tried Water poured in and she started to bank It was only a matter of time before the ship sank. Abandon ship was the order, the Captain he gave Now the task for the crew was how many they could save They got ready the lifeboats and lifejackets too Now everything depended on the Captain and crew. Despite their best efforts' to keep order and calm With the worsening situation there was panic and alarm First into the boats were women and children And if there was room they allowed in some men. For everyone on board there was not enough boats But they had a life jacket and grabbed anything that floats They took their chances and jumped over the side But the freezing waters took them and they didn't survive. Over two thousand people, not all could be saved Fifteen hundred perished in a watery grave After she went down other ships did arrive Providing blankets and warmth to those still alive. Ninteen hundred and twelve on April fifteen Was the worst maritime disaster that ever has been Two hours and twenty, she was on the sea bed Experts had claimed her "unsinkable", that's what they said. Written 27 november 2018

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Date: 11/26/2023 11:44:00 PM
The tragedy of Atlantic, though we have heard a hundred times, each time we are reminded of that fateful incident, our minds too sink to the ocean of gloom. You have narrated the story with your unusual gift of story telling. Your rhyming without saying is excellent as every time .
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Date: 11/27/2023 12:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, every day lives are lost at sea, it's an unforgiving hostile environment. The tragedy of the Titanic will never be forgotten. After that happened it bacame international law to have enough lifeboats for passengers and crew. Tom
Date: 2/16/2020 5:39:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOM have a great day with all the family, I wish I was 64 again you are the same age as my younger brother. Friends coming to stay - hopefully! So out for a nice meal later. Enjoy your birthday celebrations dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/16/2020 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Ann, enjoy your day too.
Date: 2/16/2020 3:38:00 AM
A brilliant story Tom - Congrats! Recently took my granddaughter to Southampton to see Titantic Exhibition. It was good & we spent several hours there. Enquiry statements were read out and it seems binoculars had been locked away and the man who had the key left her at Southampton not realising it was in his pocket! So they were unable to see iceburg with their naked eye, by then it was too late. Maybe this terrible tragedy could have been avoided - I wonder? With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/16/2020 4:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Ann, very wet today, all the family up later, my birthday today when you get to 64 you try and play it down lol. I heard that story, they changed one of the officers at the last minute and he forgot to give them the key, how tragic that was. My brother flew over them on his way to America once and he said it was like a mountain range, they didn't stand a chance. Enjoy the day, keep inside Dennis the menace still about lol. Tom
Date: 2/3/2018 7:26:00 PM
A brilliant write about the Titanic Tom; its weird that right after the ship went down in 1912 with a handful of rich men who were against the Federal Reserve that the following year it came to be…Great historical write Tom!~Che :)
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Date: 2/3/2018 10:58:00 PM
Thanks Cheryl, Glad you enjoyed. I wouldn't put it past some people where money was involved,Was JP Morgan really behind it, and some say it wasn't the Titanic but its ageing sister the Olympic, some sort of insurance scam, again big money. Perhaps we'll never know .(did I write about the wrong ship ?) We certainly love our conspiracies. Regards Tom
Date: 1/20/2018 1:21:00 AM
It is wonderful how you have written on so many historical incidents like this one - there are a lot on the Titanic but this is very unique and vivid I could imagine the situation, I love each line :( :))
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Date: 1/20/2018 1:51:00 AM
I read an article and aim for the main facts of it, then the hard work begins putting it to rhyme,I know it would be easier with say free verse but as you've noticed I love rhyme. This was truly a major tragedy one of many that has happened at sea. Regards Tom.
Date: 12/16/2017 8:48:00 AM
Tom! This is great! I love naval history and this is a gem. This poem should be in history books. Very beautifully done!
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Date: 12/16/2017 1:36:00 PM
Rhoda, Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Regards Tom.
Date: 12/15/2017 12:43:00 AM
Great job!
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Date: 2/3/2018 10:44:00 PM
Thank you Richard Regards Tom
Date: 11/27/2017 5:26:00 PM
Wonderful poem, wonderful story of the most famous ship, thanks for sharing, kind regards, Kevin
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Date: 11/27/2017 7:04:00 PM
Thank you Kevin, the story has always fascinated me, such a tragic ending though. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Regards Tom
Date: 11/27/2017 5:09:00 PM
You told the tale so brilliantly Tom! I've been to the Titanic exhibition in Belfast and you should send them a copy of this fabulous this poem :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/27/2017 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Jan, It is a ship that I think everyone has heard of, A beautiful ship that had such a tragic ending.We do underestimate the power of nature sometimes. Thank you for the suggestion, I'll forward it on to them. Regards Tom

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