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Riveting Moonbeams

Lover #1 riveting moonbeams flood calm quiescent river loving eyes alight Lover #2 In quiet moments Silently I wait for you Peering through picture window And suddenly you appear Ripples shimmer in soft breeze <> For Deb's "Love Talk" Contest

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/12/2011 5:43:00 AM

Lovely Haikus you've penned here, Annalise! I'm sorry not being able to comment many poems as my arm and hand still hurts. Thank you for all your kind comments! Will post another Tanka on spring today. Finally it is getting a bit warmer now! Have a great weekend...Love, Gert

James Fraser

Date: 3/10/2011 6:54:00 AM

Wow Annalise, love it. All the best with this fine piece in Deb's contest....:)

George Aul

Date: 3/9/2011 11:41:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this pleasant entry......George

Jack Horne

Date: 3/7/2011 7:36:00 AM

Lovely, Annalise, and thanks for your kind words : ) Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2011 7:12:00 AM

wow, another amazingly gorgeous one. I can see any possiblity of mine being on the list just evaporating!! Luv, Andrea

Judy Konos

Date: 3/7/2011 5:59:00 AM

very calming and lovely. Thank you for posting. best, Judy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2011 10:29:00 PM

whew, anna! passion blooms like you! love the last line...:) winning wishes to you :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2011 8:31:00 PM

Most of the entries have had one party in despair and the other offering comfort. Yours is unique in that both the man and woman have an uplifting perspective. Annalise, you are such a delight to read. Always refreshing, creative and true to your heart. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Deb Wilson

Date: 3/6/2011 8:18:00 PM

very beautiful and touching...love,Deb

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/6/2011 7:52:00 PM

lovely and Riveting Annalise. Harry