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Rivers In Flood

Rivers In Flood Sprung from headwaters, source hidden in the past or sometimes present, Starting small, To begin the journey downstream to where it may go. Restless, searching, agitated. As it sweeps along, building in force, and speed and fullness. Multiple currents, Deep, silent burdens brought up from the depths- old, ancient. They carry old history as they gather strength and density From the things that they carry – Skeleton trees, rocks, detritus. The upper current layers Foam with explosive plume and mists, Which sometimes obscure the river bed and its jagged rocks With the wild cacophony of movement. The force of history, past and present. The face of rage which carries with it. Things never changed, never resolved, never acknowledged, The Rivers in Flood tonight carrying rage. D Holmes 9/8/2020

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Date: 9/24/2020 9:02:00 PM
Wow! This write can be interpreted so many different ways. Great diversity. I'm glad I read this. Peace, Angela
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David Holmes
Date: 9/25/2020 4:42:00 AM
Angela, thank you for such kind words, am glad you enjoyed the poem, David
Date: 9/9/2020 12:58:00 PM
You remind me of white water rafting, But your poem runs far deeper than that, Quite powerful! Merci, Pamagiota xx
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Date: 9/17/2020 9:02:00 AM
Panagiota - ah yes, white water rafting, thank you for your comments, David
Date: 9/8/2020 3:45:00 PM
Hello David Holmes, the river doe have rage. yet sometimes it is calm. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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David Holmes
Date: 9/17/2020 9:01:00 AM
Darlene - thank you so much for your comments - enjoy your day. David

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