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River of Tears 1

Flow silent water Past my heart of weeping desires Carrying the hopes and dreams Of a lifetime. Flow silent water Not even a pebble breaks the surface I mindlessly drag my hand Through the coldness of reality Flow silent water Take my soul with you My life you have already In your river of tears

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 12/12/2013 6:03:00 PM

Sad when one can't even flow and be lost in the sea of existence, but with everything, I think you're doing remarkable although I'm sure you don't always feel that way.

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/10/2013 6:25:00 AM

This is a wonderfully written write my friend, even though it is sad I am enamored by the grandiosity of this poem! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2013 4:10:00 PM

Thank you Russell

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/10/2013 5:11:00 AM

beautiful but so sad xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2013 4:09:00 PM

Yep Mandy it is.