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River of Love

My love for you is like a river As bubbling stream it had it’s start Slowly building up momentum Tugging gently at my heart Down the hill of life it rumbled Over rock through gully deep No obstacle on earth could stop it No one on earth me from you keep Now it is a raging torrent Passion roaring through my veins Over waterfalls it tumbles Ever onward strength it gains Then it comes down to the valley Slower now but still so strong Flowing slowly through life’s pastures Running still and deep and long Widens gently as it reaches All the way down to the sea Where the wind picks up the moisture To feed sweetheart my love for thee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/10/2014 5:47:00 PM
An elegant and rich love; a flowing passion from stream to ocean. A great write Robert.
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:50:00 PM
Oh! Robert that poem is absolutely beautiful It put a picture in my mind, loved it. Vera
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 3/2/2014 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Vera for your appreciation this one flowed out really quickly.Sometimes you wonder where they come from. Regards to Peter. Andy
Date: 2/21/2014 8:16:00 PM
Enjoyed this one Robert, a timeless message
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 3/2/2014 12:05:00 PM
thank you Frederic for your comment. So glad you enjoyed it. Andy
Date: 2/19/2014 3:52:00 PM
very pleasant.. i can feel the calm and peacefulness on your poem as it flows down through my veins...i'm in love with this, Rob! ..^__^ ..
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/19/2014 4:04:00 PM
Thank you for commenting on my poem. So glad you enjoyed it. Andy

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