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Let us watch the purple morning rise, above the misty streams, while waiting for the sun to come, so we won't be alone We must cling to hope when faith has gone, along with all our dreams..... until the soothing sounds of river's song has smoothed the jagged stones.
____________________________________________________ 2/18/16 Inspired by contest: "River of Dreams"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/26/2016 5:50:00 AM
Hi Carrie. Congrats for your top placement with this wonderful verse!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations! This is comforting!
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Date: 2/22/2016 6:04:00 AM
Congrats on top win dear friend.... Beautiful in totality; the last two lines very powerful monokus on their own!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:27:00 PM
And back again with big congrats Carrie..I had full faith in its win.
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Date: 2/21/2016 7:19:00 PM
congratulations Carrie on your placement in the contest :)
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Date: 2/21/2016 6:53:00 PM
Hi Carrie, a wonderful write and worthy of a 1st place win. Congratulations winging there way to you....Vlad.
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Date: 2/21/2016 2:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful!
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Date: 2/21/2016 2:16:00 PM
lovely write well done
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:57:00 PM
Truly beautiful, Carrie!! Three striking lines, especially the end one. Congratulations on placing first! // paul
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Date: 2/21/2016 12:37:00 PM
Beautiful, Carrie. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/21/2016 11:11:00 AM
Wonderful warm feeling your poem gives me!!!! Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:13:00 AM
Beautiful and tranquil, Carrie! I could see why it got first place. I adored the "soothing sounds" over "jagged stones" ....! :)
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:13:00 AM
An awesome number one win, Carrie. Congratulations to you.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:06:00 AM
Ps........... WOW... love the first line... LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:05:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:44:00 AM
This is just beautiful!! Congratulations, dear Carrie!! :D :D
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Date: 2/19/2016 11:24:00 AM
Lovely!
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Date: 2/19/2016 1:31:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful Carrie.. best wishes!
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Date: 2/19/2016 12:10:00 AM
beautiful poetry. CT
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:00:00 PM
Beautiful write, Carrie, great flow.
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