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River Line

Splashing in invigorating beads of perspiration Blasphemous pouting over grievances, neigh retirement Itchy foaming kiss, yoked in tumult, dispersed in action Catapulting inertia when ravishing tarry While drenched, unquenched thirst raves belly of aqua's mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/11/2017 8:01:00 AM
A profound metaphoric verse,Samiha. My compliments!
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Date: 12/24/2016 8:26:00 AM
Hi Samiha! I read and commented on this poem about 4 days ago, but looks like I have nothing to show for it!! I like your metaphorical take on the expressive 'aqua' effect of this 'river'...very creative! #7+ Wishing you all the best as the year nears its end...hoping that 2017 will bring you love, health, peace and contentment. Warm regards // paul
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 12/25/2016 8:17:00 AM
Hello Paul, how are you. I read your comment its even published for a blog. Your well of reflections is a shining star for any amateur.
Date: 11/28/2016 1:01:00 AM
Autobiographical? 'Aqua's mine', so meaningful. Congratulations, Kai
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 12/3/2016 1:07:00 PM
Drive for thirst is more when you are soaked. Thanks.
Date: 11/27/2016 7:00:00 PM
Great poem. Congrats, Samiha!
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/27/2016 7:02:00 PM
Thanks for riding with me on the waves. Have fun
Date: 11/27/2016 6:53:00 PM
River in action with many emotions! Congrats, Samiha!
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/27/2016 6:56:00 PM
Thanks. Keep in touch.

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