River Line
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River Line, meandering transparent ribbon of cold.
Whirling companion, confusingly refreshing white gold,
The road adjusts itself to the water's strong will. It lives
Its wild and stubborn life, hardly able to be contained;
Often it takes our lives, without its love we die, it gives.
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I will use here, for this poem: HOW MANY SYLLABLES. They tell me I have 14 syllables per line.
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Copyright © Darren White | Year Posted 2016
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