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River Life In River Line

You and I who have dipped our joint heart In your green tide and have exchanged beats On your boats have left our loads of flirts Do know your tales both dismal and lit Into the boats sails salted struggle Blood sweat and tears for flowers of love On busy banks business and bustle We live and die, you flow on superb Listen to the murmuring guitar Look at the fishermen and women In love-sweat mirth and life in vigour River of life in the spring and rain ____________________________________________ 10/12/2016 Form: River Line :9 syllables in each line Contest Sponsor: Rick Parise

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Date: 12/13/2016 4:53:00 PM
Whao! Beautiful! This is awe-inspiring.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/14/2016 4:14:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/11/2016 2:40:00 PM
uplifting me to greater heights, probir.... fine work.. huggs
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Date: 12/11/2016 10:39:00 AM
Beautiful serene and lovely
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/11/2016 11:35:00 AM
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Date: 12/11/2016 9:31:00 AM
Lovely verse, Probir, I love the choive of colors you have chosen hugs Eve
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Date: 12/11/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 12/11/2016 8:02:00 AM
Very nice Probir :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/11/2016 11:37:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...

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