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River Life

Rivulet streaming like a free verse, the current’s reveal love’s babbling brook- Branches fallen, my true life’s calling craving the flow of waterfall's look. The ebb flow leading me to immerse, imagination is all it took- River life captures, blissful raptures, as the torrent keeps flowing transverse. I quietly touch the soft texture, for rain does the gentle river thirst- Nature’s creation, fabrication, fascination guides me to submerse. December 18, 2016

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Date: 2/21/2017 10:25:00 AM
Very well written. Congrats on your placement. a 7.
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:47:00 PM
Beautiful description, luloo. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:43:00 PM
Lovely images, Luloo!
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Date: 12/20/2016 8:21:00 AM
This is beautiful a lot said in a few words merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/20/2016 8:20:00 AM
Very good, Laura, I didn't know what to write. Good luck in the contest merry Christmas and happy holidays Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/18/2016 6:47:00 PM
flowing like a stream with lovely rhythm of romance, lou.. huggs
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Date: 12/18/2016 11:17:00 AM
with this write you submerged your mind to become the river. I really like this write Laura
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