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River Laps Softly

River Laps Softly The ripples of water lap river's edge quietly I sit, a man seeking love The orange twilight stirs my lonely soul nearby, lonely call of a single dove Sweetest place roaring river moans and churns fish splashing about in a soft replay Continuance as the world slowly turns colors splash endings to wonderful day The smell is that of fish , water and mud cool air spreading its greatest soft relief Comfort gives to stop anger in my blood as Nature gifts a most calming belief Soon its quiet , knowledge enters my soul Victory came because I made it so Robert J. Lindley, 08-08-2014 Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Total # Words: 101 Contest results.... Sonnet Entered in the contest, Any poem under 15 lines, Poet Destroyer First Place

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Date: 1/5/2017 12:39:00 PM
This is fantastic, love the journey this took me on Robert
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/5/2017 2:17:00 PM
Thanks. It was written decades before the posting date shown.. As are hundreds of my poems presented here. Ive been writing 'poetry for over 45 years now!
Date: 9/10/2014 3:55:00 PM
Very impressive work..Way to go with this great winner..Enjoyed reading this one today..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2014 11:36:00 PM
Wonderful and lovely piece..Great work,Robert..Congrats on your superb win...
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Date: 9/6/2014 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your very beautiful poem and awesome win Richard.
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Date: 9/6/2014 10:45:00 AM
Robert, I think this is my favorite of the many poems of yours that I have read. May I encourage you to continue writing like this? Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/6/2014 5:26:00 AM
Well crafted sonnet and congrats on the great win, robert
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Date: 9/5/2014 11:41:00 PM
anytime Robert... PD
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Date: 9/5/2014 6:52:00 PM
I love it, the ending was perfect! So glad to see this in the top slot, well done :)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/5/2014 7:24:00 PM
Thanks my friend.. I put my heart and soul into this write because that is a real place I go to. In fact, need to go there perhaps this weekend.....
Date: 9/5/2014 6:29:00 PM
Thank you .. This is one of the few writes posted here that I put much extra time and care into.
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Date: 9/5/2014 5:29:00 PM
Hello Robert, this is the top of them all...Love it, Congratulations, 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/5/2014 7:25:00 PM
Thank you .. This is one of the few writes posted here that I put so very much extra time and care into.
Date: 8/12/2014 6:38:00 AM
This is a picture of sweet serenity! Can't get those feelings amid the hustle and bustle of a city.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/12/2014 8:21:00 AM
Thanks my good friend. That kind of peace and serenity only comes to me when out in Nature alone. The solitude just amplifies it for me .
Date: 8/10/2014 11:31:00 PM
Ahhhhhhhhh! Robert that is such a peaceful serene poem my friend, loved it.Love to Riza and Justine, take care.................Vera......... Posted your mail today, you should get it in a weeks time (Hopefully)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/12/2014 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Vera , looking forward to it my friend. Australia has always been my favorite place to visit. Simply amazing that I have never managed to come there for a year long stay/trek as I had always planned!
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Vera Duggan
Date: 8/10/2014 11:32:00 PM
By the way Robert we will send you some snaps of our holiday.
Date: 8/10/2014 7:02:00 AM
oh so inspiring is this wonderful sonnet Robert...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/10/2014 8:10:00 AM
Thank you. A place I go when life has beaten me down. I go out into Nature when needing relief.
Date: 8/9/2014 12:14:00 PM
This, is why I fish.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/9/2014 8:42:00 PM
Thanks for commenting. Fishing at a favorite spot can be a very soothing experience in life. I need to do more of it, if only Ican find the time..

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