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River In Early July

Flowing, sparkling, refreshingly clear Dipped in my toes, ah yes too cold -just as I feared For John Freemans Contest

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/14/2010 8:09:00 AM

Congrats on the 5th place win

Date: 7/13/2010 3:15:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in John's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing!! Karen

Date: 7/13/2010 3:15:00 PM

PS--brings back childhood memories for me. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 10:37:00 AM

Congratulations Molly on your win in John Freeman's contest "Give Wisdom It's Beauty" (a couple of lines). Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/13/2010 7:26:00 AM

Congrats Molly on your winning poem in the Wisdom contest with this powerful message in couplet form.. enjoy your big win.. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2010 3:55:00 AM

Even in Florida, spring-fed rivers are cold in the summer. Clever observation, Molly. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 7/13/2010 12:51:00 AM

Smile, congratulations Molly on your success in the contest. agape, Moses

Rick Parise

Date: 7/12/2010 7:41:00 PM

Very good Molly~You are to a poet, Can't lie to me~remember writing in 96 at my state st. apartment(WOW)what a re-call. Love you~Rick~I Really love this one, so good

Rick Parise

Date: 7/12/2010 7:38:00 PM

Very good Molly~You are to a poet, Can't lie to me~remember writing in 96 at my state st. apartment(WOW)what a re-call. Love you~Rick

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/12/2010 12:55:00 PM

A very nice write, good luck in the contest. I enjoyed the read. Caryl